thanks for the comments guys. Excellent poem Paul.
I spent a lot of time hurling, flipping and tossing pebbles into the Adriatic this summer and thought it might be a good idea if a trifle self-indulgent to write down what each stone said as it hit the water "kalopp... flumph..." etc.
Needless to say, I didn't and most likely never will.
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Excellent David. It says so much by saying so little.
An old one of mine.
sinking
deeper
into
cloud
a stone
(Presence)
well done David
thanks for the comments guys. Excellent poem Paul.
I spent a lot of time hurling, flipping and tossing pebbles into the Adriatic this summer and thought it might be a good idea if a trifle self-indulgent to write down what each stone said as it hit the water "kalopp... flumph..." etc.
Needless to say, I didn't and most likely never will.
What a beautiful picture you have painted with these few words.
Lovit___! The "stone skips across the sky," a fine vision, Dave! _m
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