micropoetry by david serjeant
Sometimes I don't look through the window but see these waterpearls run against each other. Most of the time they do not finish as the drop which has started: they join each other, get bigger and faster. Your haiku opens a new view on the rain itself. And your raindrops might be those which hit you or enter your life just for the second they finish on the ground. Splash. Very nice, makes me think.Best wishesRalf
another good one David
I have been here earlier....was not in the right frame of mind to comment, perhapsbut definitely enjoyed the poems, David, especially this raindrops one...the stone and many other...very astute and crisp, and i like them for that :)wishes, devika
And most of all, the blog name was striking :)devika
Wow - thanks Devika for dropping by and the kind comments.
Tee hee! - should have said "dripping by"
I like this, an interesting juxtaposition of man and nature. Very nice and thought provoking. Thanks!, EC
haha! fun?? :)wishes, devika
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