micropoetry by david serjeant
Excellent David. It says so much by saying so little.An old one of mine.sinkingdeeperintoclouda stone(Presence)
well done David
thanks for the comments guys. Excellent poem Paul.I spent a lot of time hurling, flipping and tossing pebbles into the Adriatic this summer and thought it might be a good idea if a trifle self-indulgent to write down what each stone said as it hit the water "kalopp... flumph..." etc.Needless to say, I didn't and most likely never will.
What a beautiful picture you have painted with these few words.
Lovit___! The "stone skips across the sky," a fine vision, Dave! _m
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