19 October 2009

mountain lake's stillness
my stone skips across
the sky


Dalloway said...


Paul Smith said...

Excellent David. It says so much by saying so little.
An old one of mine.



a stone


John McDonald said...

well done David

Dave Serjeant said...

thanks for the comments guys. Excellent poem Paul.

I spent a lot of time hurling, flipping and tossing pebbles into the Adriatic this summer and thought it might be a good idea if a trifle self-indulgent to write down what each stone said as it hit the water "kalopp... flumph..." etc.

Needless to say, I didn't and most likely never will.

T.Migratorius said...

What a beautiful picture you have painted with these few words.

Magyar said...

Lovit___! The "stone skips across the sky," a fine vision, Dave! _m

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