distant lightning

22 February 2010

stargazing
with my daughter -
an aircraft
joins the dots
of Orion's belt

published: Blithe Spirit 19:4 (current issue)

Shadow Arcade said...: I like it! Very interesting! Leaves me wanting 2 hear more!; 22 February 2010 at 16:24
Devika Jyothi said...: Oh i see...and then!?

kidding, Good one, David :)

wishes,
devika; 22 February 2010 at 17:33
Frank... said...: A very nice tanka, Dave...; 22 February 2010 at 17:58
Paul Smith said...: This is great Dave. The vastness of the night sky and the smallness (I mean that positively) of a father and child is beautiful.; 26 February 2010 at 14:34
Area 17 said...: Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful!

I have a stargazing haiku coming up in the next issue of Presence! ;-)

Presence: weblink

all my best,

Alan
Alan’s Area 17 blog
.; 27 February 2010 at 11:57