22 February 2010

stargazing
with my daughter -
an aircraft
joins   the   dots
of Orion's belt




published: Blithe Spirit 19:4 (current issue)

5 comments:

Shadow Arcade said...

I like it! Very interesting! Leaves me wanting 2 hear more!

Devika said...

Oh i see...and then!?

kidding, Good one, David :)

wishes,
devika

Frank Williams said...

A very nice tanka, Dave...

Paul Smith said...

This is great Dave. The vastness of the night sky and the smallness (I mean that positively) of a father and child is beautiful.

Alan Summers said...

Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful!

I have a stargazing haiku coming up in the next issue of Presence! ;-)

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