micropoetry by david serjeant
I like it! Very interesting! Leaves me wanting 2 hear more!
Oh i see...and then!? kidding, Good one, David :)wishes, devika
A very nice tanka, Dave...
This is great Dave. The vastness of the night sky and the smallness (I mean that positively) of a father and child is beautiful.
Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful!I have a stargazing haiku coming up in the next issue of Presence! ;-)Presence: weblinkall my best,AlanAlan’s Area 17 blog.
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