5 August 2014

#3

Sunday league match
a swallow dives and jinks
inches above the box

4 comments:

Dave Serjeant said...

Thought I'd introduce some football parlance to describe the swallow's movement.

Dave Serjeant said...

...jinks and twists

:-)

Matthew Paul said...

This is my favourite version, Dave. I really like the addition of 'jinks'.

The stadium tour haiku was by Matt Morden, originally published in Snapshots I think.

Dave Serjeant said...

Oh was it Matt's? *quickly thumbs through copy of Wing Beats* ... so it was! Apologies.

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