4 August 2014

Sunday league match
a swallow skims
and twists the penalty box


Dave Serjeant said...

Wondered if this might be an improvement on yesterday's post.

Matthew Paul said...

I prefer the original, perhaps with lines 2 & 3 reversed. Either way, what's not to like: birds and football in the same haiku. Marvellous. :-)

Dave Serjeant said...

Sunday league pitch
a swallow twists and turns
inches above the box

Dave Serjeant said...

Hi Matthew. I remember your stadium tour pigeon. That has to be the ultimate bird/football haiku.

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