5 August 2014


Sunday league match
a swallow dives and jinks
inches above the box


Dave Serjeant said...

Thought I'd introduce some football parlance to describe the swallow's movement.

Dave Serjeant said...

...jinks and twists


Matthew Paul said...

This is my favourite version, Dave. I really like the addition of 'jinks'.

The stadium tour haiku was by Matt Morden, originally published in Snapshots I think.

Dave Serjeant said...

Oh was it Matt's? *quickly thumbs through copy of Wing Beats* ... so it was! Apologies.

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