micropoetry by david serjeant
Sunday league match
a swallow dives and jinks
inches above the box
Thought I'd introduce some football parlance to describe the swallow's movement.
...jinks and twists:-)
This is my favourite version, Dave. I really like the addition of 'jinks'.The stadium tour haiku was by Matt Morden, originally published in Snapshots I think.
Oh was it Matt's? *quickly thumbs through copy of Wing Beats* ... so it was! Apologies.
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