prompt: leap day / year
leap day -
on my way back
the busker still silent
and this concludes my NaHaiWriMo contributions for Feb 2012. Prompts continue all year but February is the main month. I may still pop in and out over the year.
The prompt for #28 was to rewrite a computer generated haiku into a passable haiku / senryu. I've had a go, but it isn't great ...
generated "haiku":
rumbling echo gnaws
icicle quarrels hotly
hotly lame
my rewrite:
woken by hunger
I trip down the stairs -
an ice pack from the fridge
to my knee
2 comments:
those generator things are truly horrible, aren't they ;)
but we've made it thru february with some useful stuff
indeed
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