27 July 2010

flower after
         flower after
    flower
the intermittent bumble
of a bee

5 comments:

Frank said...

Nice haiku Dave, in particular I like the way you have set this poem out on the page...

Gerry Boyd said...

nice!

Devika said...

Yes, i too like the way the poem is set out, David...good poem, too :)

wishes,
devika

Dave Serjeant said...

thank you guys

Alan Summers said...

Good line breaks, and I bet it's great to read out to a live audience.

Alan
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