27 July 2010

flower after
         flower after
the intermittent bumble
of a bee


Frank said...

Nice haiku Dave, in particular I like the way you have set this poem out on the page...

Gerry Boyd said...


Devika said...

Yes, i too like the way the poem is set out, David...good poem, too :)


Dave Serjeant said...

thank you guys

Alan Summers said...

Good line breaks, and I bet it's great to read out to a live audience.

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