summer night
the old stone wall
still warm
published Presence #35
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6 comments:
this was written a number of years ago (after a walk back from the pub) and is one of my first attempts at haiku. It came in at No 12 in the Presence best of issue poll.
and deserving so
A good feel haiku David - nice one...
Too many mistakes. Here it is again:
Handsome. In the pure meaning of the word. In German there is a word called Handschmeichler. It describes a stoneegg which enjoys you when you touch it. Translated one by one: a hand-charmer.
I saw your hand on this old wall, Dave.
Best wishes
Ralf
Actually, I didn't need to touch it (although I did). It was like walking past a radiator
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