23 June 2009

dead bumblebee
the ground around it
darkens with raindrops

5 comments:

John McDonald said...

another good one Dave

Dalloway said...

agree, I like your stuff

Frank Williams said...

This haiku has a nice rhythm to it. The rhyming of ground/around is very effective...

RBroeker said...

I see the drops falling - and the animal starts to dissapear. Good one.

Best wishes
Ralf

bluetoque said...

This is excellent Dave. There is alot happening here, and a bit of sadness too.

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