dead bumblebee
the ground around it
darkens with raindrops
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5 comments:
another good one Dave
agree, I like your stuff
This haiku has a nice rhythm to it. The rhyming of ground/around is very effective...
I see the drops falling - and the animal starts to dissapear. Good one.
Best wishes
Ralf
This is excellent Dave. There is alot happening here, and a bit of sadness too.
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