steel city sunset
looming on the skyline
anvils
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10 comments:
'steel city sunset' love that line. Great work here Dave.
Very nice haiku, Dave. Like Paul I love the first line...
Thank you guys! This poem was "made in Sheffield"
i agree with Paul; what a great opener; 'steel city sunset'
just crunches in
much love
gillena
Thank you Gillena!
Thanks for your recent compliment on my blog. :) Love this haiku. The alliteration in the first line caught my attention...love that! Great image.
I like the use of "anvils" here. It allows a view into past and presence. Good one, Dave.
Best wishes
Ralf
Kristin, Ralf - thank you!
Very intense !
It´s like Zen for a Mechanical era.
I like it.
nice one Dave
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