30 September 2010

steel city sunset
looming on the skyline
anvils

10 comments:

Paul Smith said...

'steel city sunset' love that line. Great work here Dave.

Frank said...

Very nice haiku, Dave. Like Paul I love the first line...

Dave Serjeant said...

Thank you guys! This poem was "made in Sheffield"

Gillena Cox said...

i agree with Paul; what a great opener; 'steel city sunset'
just crunches in

much love
gillena

Dave Serjeant said...

Thank you Gillena!

Kristin Riggs said...

Thanks for your recent compliment on my blog. :) Love this haiku. The alliteration in the first line caught my attention...love that! Great image.

Ralf Bröker said...

I like the use of "anvils" here. It allows a view into past and presence. Good one, Dave.

Best wishes
Ralf

Dave Serjeant said...

Kristin, Ralf - thank you!

BB said...

Very intense !
It´s like Zen for a Mechanical era.
I like it.

John McDonald said...

nice one Dave

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