tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965440206248248651.post4979230621427407052..comments2024-01-08T06:45:59.990+00:00Comments on distant lightning: Dave Serjeanthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06479441346697423799noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965440206248248651.post-58541532982755634002010-10-15T08:48:41.219+01:002010-10-15T08:48:41.219+01:00nice one Davenice one DaveJohn McDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965440206248248651.post-71847480062245856032010-10-12T02:04:47.784+01:002010-10-12T02:04:47.784+01:00Very intense !
It´s like Zen for a Mechanical era....Very intense !<br />It´s like Zen for a Mechanical era.<br />I like it.BBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18174318797989443147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965440206248248651.post-79627728952904955172010-10-11T00:10:30.207+01:002010-10-11T00:10:30.207+01:00Kristin, Ralf - thank you!Kristin, Ralf - thank you!Dave Serjeanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06479441346697423799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965440206248248651.post-2727576764517327062010-10-10T13:00:41.342+01:002010-10-10T13:00:41.342+01:00I like the use of "anvils" here. It allo...I like the use of "anvils" here. It allows a view into past and presence. Good one, Dave.<br /><br />Best wishes<br />RalfRalf Brökerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965440206248248651.post-67053647784745738662010-10-09T05:36:14.386+01:002010-10-09T05:36:14.386+01:00Thanks for your recent compliment on my blog. :) L...Thanks for your recent compliment on my blog. :) Love this haiku. The alliteration in the first line caught my attention...love that! Great image.Kristin Riggshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16779222705654595462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965440206248248651.post-49672083959007087082010-10-06T13:35:59.499+01:002010-10-06T13:35:59.499+01:00Thank you Gillena!Thank you Gillena!Dave Serjeanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06479441346697423799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965440206248248651.post-963038370106613392010-10-06T13:20:57.387+01:002010-10-06T13:20:57.387+01:00i agree with Paul; what a great opener; 'steel...i agree with Paul; what a great opener; 'steel city sunset' <br />just crunches in <br /><br /><i>much love<br />gillena</i>Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965440206248248651.post-56040401149568829322010-10-05T23:10:45.931+01:002010-10-05T23:10:45.931+01:00Thank you guys! This poem was "made in Sheffi...Thank you guys! This poem was "made in Sheffield"Dave Serjeanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06479441346697423799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965440206248248651.post-65845140579297069562010-10-05T23:02:53.748+01:002010-10-05T23:02:53.748+01:00Very nice haiku, Dave. Like Paul I love the first ...Very nice haiku, Dave. Like Paul I love the first line...Frank...https://www.blogger.com/profile/02197806933052269135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-965440206248248651.post-8270911152138080042010-10-05T14:20:48.315+01:002010-10-05T14:20:48.315+01:00'steel city sunset' love that line. Great ...'steel city sunset' love that line. Great work here Dave.Paul Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14956559361042183430noreply@blogger.com