11 April 2010

a late spring
the blackbird tries
a different tune

6 comments:

Frank Williams said...

Blackbirds do seem to have a varied repertoire. A very nice haiku, Dave...

John McDonald said...

enjoyed this David

Paul Smith said...

Nice one Dave.

Ralf Bröker said...

Written with an easy hand, read as multilayer poem. Having read it a couple of times: the change of sound and rhythm with the last word is - remarkably good.

Best wishes
Ralf

Dave Serjeant said...

Thanks for the comments everyone

Gen said...

Nice!!

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