24 September 2009

down country lanes -
at every bend
jackdaws




first appeared in slightly different form in Shamrock #5

4 comments:

Frank Williams said...

This haiku has a very Hitchcockian feel - love it...

Paul Smith said...

I really like the feel of this one David.

RBroeker said...

Could be written in my area as well. I hear them croak ...

Best wishes
Ralf

Dave Serjeant said...

Thanks for the comments, guys.

It says a lot about my driving style along lanes I know well - there always seems to be a flock escaping from the branches above me.

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