16 April 2013

doorstep canvassing
the fury
of a small dog


doorstep canvassing -
a small dog's
                   fury


(in honour of the forthcoming county council elections)
version 1 = best - see comments

7 comments:

Frank... said...

I like the humour in this haiku. Nice one Dave...

Dave Serjeant said...

original post:

doorstep canvassing -
the fury
of a small dog

Dave Serjeant said...

now I come to think of it... I'm not that sure which I prefer...

Dave Serjeant said...

...possibly the original (see comment above) as it has a punchline.

Matthew Paul said...

I think I prefer the original, Dave, for the reason you cite.

What breed was it?

Dave Serjeant said...

Thanks Matthew. The original it is, then.

I'm not an expert on small angry dogs, but I think it was a shih tzu.

Matthew Paul said...

A right little shih tzu by the sound of it...

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