17 January 2012

Re-worked oldies (urban)

Originals of the following are available online / in print elsewhere. These are the reworked versions - all on an urban theme:

lights on red
weaving through the traffic
a white butterfly

the police car slows -
suburban foxes
looting from bins

under its breath
the Northern Line train
cursing the suicide

restless -
across the summer night
siren upon siren


Dave Serjeant said...

Hi! Frank Williams has been leaving comments on my posts lately.

Frank - if you read this, it's impossible for me to leave comments on your blog at the moment, for some reason.

I don't know why, but I think it's a technical problem and solutions have been posted on blogger message boards.

I didn't want you to think I had been ignoring your blog.

Frank... said...

Hi Dave: you are the second person to say they were unable post on my blog. Hopefully it'll sort itself out shortly. Thanks...

Best, Frank...

Frank... said...

Sorry, meant to say that I enjoyed reading your sequence, Dave. Super stuff!...

all works are copyright, © David Serjeant. If you plan to use any of the work here, I will probably have no problem with that if you credit me as the author, link to this blog and let me know first. Thank you!

background image: beeley moor spin photo © David Serjeant