7 October 2011

turf smoke -
the shortcut
no shorter

5 comments:

Nana Fredua-Agyeman said...

Your first two lines are powerful and one I've experienced over and over.

Dave Serjeant said...

The piece has been revised since Nana's comment and lines 1 and 2 have moved to lines 2 and 3.

Thanks for the feedback Nana!

Paul Smith said...

Great poem Dave...

Dave Serjeant said...

Thanks Paul

John McDonald said...

lovely sets here Dave

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