29 November 2009

the drunk
so forceful
yet so light
when she barges into me
voices her opinions

2 comments:

Devika Jyothi said...

Yes, in a half drunk state it all feels so! :))

anyway, I enjoyed this one, David :)

wishes,
devika

Ralf Bröker said...

A powerful verse. I can hear her stagger.

Best wishes
Ralf

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