micropoetry by david serjeant
I like the humour in this haiku. Nice one Dave...
original post:doorstep canvassing -the furyof a small dog
now I come to think of it... I'm not that sure which I prefer...
...possibly the original (see comment above) as it has a punchline.
I think I prefer the original, Dave, for the reason you cite.What breed was it?
Thanks Matthew. The original it is, then. I'm not an expert on small angry dogs, but I think it was a shih tzu.
A right little shih tzu by the sound of it...
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I like the humour in this haiku. Nice one Dave...
original post:
doorstep canvassing -
the fury
of a small dog
now I come to think of it... I'm not that sure which I prefer...
...possibly the original (see comment above) as it has a punchline.
I think I prefer the original, Dave, for the reason you cite.
What breed was it?
Thanks Matthew. The original it is, then.
I'm not an expert on small angry dogs, but I think it was a shih tzu.
A right little shih tzu by the sound of it...
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